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Phoenix

Apparently, when I get emotional I write poetry. The mood of it explains the mood I was in when it was written - which is pretty much how I do that. Anyway, here’s a poem:

It dulls your senses
Makes your head throb
Makes you rage against one -
Someone?

No one.

Howling at the white moon framed by the black sky
Black like your pain.
Wings of hatred sprout, and you fly
Away from it all

Information floods your brain
Like that tall gray wall that is your pride has finally broken
under the relentless attack (cliché though it is)
of that hurricane of feelings

It never ends.

Only waits, watching.
And your soul dies, over and over
Reborn each time - a surreal phoenix, if you will - comprised of your thoughts, hopes, dreams
Emerges anew when the call of this phoenix is answered and the sun rises
And your eyes dry, yet still smart from the heat
Stinging and twitching with memory.

The human race is not forgiving, nor is it ever forgiven.
This is not said without good reason.

I’m going to be entering this into a competition soon since I thought it was pretty good. I wondered at how the words seemed to flow straight from my mind to the paper - the pencil only a gateway. Of course, see where it gets me? Now I’m being what I call “clichéd poetic” without even trying. Anyway, hope you like it, and there’s another webcomic coming soon (possibly a series soon too!).

Son of Patchpelt, Part Three

Reminiscent of Raven

A glittering black
reminiscent of raven
as if a flash of wings
fluttering by, blacker than night
blacker than blackest, it takes away your fear
your hunger
your desire
curiosity wells: in the tranquil gardens of your mind
a sprinkling of dew wets the green green grass
inexplicably falling to unmapped distances

Potion

Deathly cauldron
simmering whilst the witch chants
over her potion
it will not cure warts
nor a broken heart
and it doesn’t particularly seem to do anything
so the witch is disappointed
but she trudges on
through the fields of knowledge
picking a flower, once in a while
for the love of life she tries and tries again
until her ingredients, and soul, are spent.

Raindrop

The illusion of mist
a shimmering blue
walking along
staying true
to the laws of nature
that govern all
yet impossibly
the rain does not fall
touch a drop
it will implode
it’s life spent
death to you owed

Patchpelt cont.

Still gathering words and phrases…

Please comment with some of your favorite ones.

A short snippet I noticed:

The Estonian man who was caught driving a car even though he is blind has been at it again, police said on Monday, and this time he faces jail.

Remember? Oddly Enough? :D

Patchpelt Poetry

Have you ever looked at random words and put them together in a sentence? Have you ever rearranged those sets of fridge magnets to make funny sentences? Well, recently at CVU Summer Camp, I saw the last bit of a poetry class happening and was very interested. Each of the students in the class, Arthus included, had written at least 5 random poetic phrases and drawn them on the white board.

Now, this reminded me of how I write. I am an okay writer but this is only because I memorize phrases I find interesting; for example, in the book I was reading recently, Spare Change, I found a phrase I liked: “…so recently out of law school they smelled like diploma ink.” This phrase is one of many I find interesting, along with many words, such as quagmire (from Eragon), blunderbuss, and Nebakanezer.

The whole point of this: I will be doing some poetry created from random words and phrases I see wherever I go. How this will turn out, I don’t know, but hopefully it will go well.

If you feel like it, comment with some of your favorite words and or phrases.

To be continued…

More Writing

I haven’t posted in a while, and it seems like Arthus’ writing section stimulates me, because once again I have seen it and chosen to post a piece of writing. Again I am doing a poem. Please forgive me if it is a bit sappy and way too hormone influenced. (only arthus understands the title and it’s classified information so sorry for any confusion)

Frodo

I see her walking by
And my heart pounds
In a metaphorical sense, of course
I don’t see the use in talking to her (I would just make myself a fool more)
Except for the occasional comment
I watch from a distance
I am no stalker, just a teenager
I chat once in a while
And that’s okay with me
I don’t really want anything to happen
People offer me help, to get to know her
But I am okay where I am now, watching
I decline.
I listen to my techno music while thinking
Should I do anything?
I know that is is only a “puppy love” situation
But I also know that I like her
In most songs I hear
They talk of love
It is a touchy thing, and all of them get it wrong
All of us can feel it
But never describe it
I cannot describe it either.
All we can do is try to explain how we feel
And mess it up and try and try again
Nobody really understands how it feels for any person other than themselves
And we know this
We all know this
So why am I even trying?
I know nothing will ever happen with us, except maybe a dance or two, because I am just a stupid teenager in this gigantic planet full of them. I am just a stupid geek, damn it, I’m typing this on my blog on the internet, but still…
So I sit back in the chair and think some more.

I don’t like or dislike writing any more (I used to hate it), and it makes me feel strange, especially poetry on touchy subjects. I hope I will gather my courage and ask Frodo to dance after graduation, but I doubt I ever will. But I think we all have and have had our middle school (so sue me if I haven’t had a crush yet, I’m a nerd) crushes, and like it that way.